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Home From War
Upon arriving home from war the young man noticed it was his hometown but not home.
He soon realizes that everyone and everything he loved and grew up with was gone or about to be gone.
The old stores closed and renamed, the houses torn down and most of the people he grew up with were gone and or forgot him.
soon upon arriving home and trying to live there again for a few months he soon is depressed and decides to write a letter
to God, this is his letter................................................................................................
.............................................. Dear God, what do I do when everything is finely looking up, I get home
and then your whole world starts falling apart? When everything you grew up loving starts falling apart? When the people that
helped teach you how to be an adult start dieing out and all your friends from your childhood have forgotten you and wont
talk to you? What do you do when you're best friend ain't around anymore? What to do when the few friends that you talk to live
to far away to meet in person and have a bad time but you can't help, you're to far away. when sometimes there's something
wrong and someone asks what it is? How do you tell them where they can understand? when you know what you got to do but find
it to hard and you become like a powerless child to it, what do you do? What to do when you see things happening?
He soon realizes that everyone and everything he loved and grew up with was gone or about to be gone.
The old stores closed and renamed, the houses torn down and most of the people he grew up with were gone and or forgot him.
soon upon arriving home and trying to live there again for a few months he soon is depressed and decides to write a letter
to God, this is his letter................................................................................................
.............................................. Dear God, what do I do when everything is finely looking up, I get home
and then your whole world starts falling apart? When everything you grew up loving starts falling apart? When the people that
helped teach you how to be an adult start dieing out and all your friends from your childhood have forgotten you and wont
talk to you? What do you do when you're best friend ain't around anymore? What to do when the few friends that you talk to live
to far away to meet in person and have a bad time but you can't help, you're to far away. when sometimes there's something
wrong and someone asks what it is? How do you tell them where they can understand? when you know what you got to do but find
it to hard and you become like a powerless child to it, what do you do? What to do when you see things happening?
| On October 11th 2007 dcmartin21 Said : | |
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humm somethamge about this looks familuer=/ lol writer done ok but needs more practice |


