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can some one help me...?
What can I do…?
I can’t hold this any more…
I can’t cry any more…
I want to scream….
I want to get this out of my head…
Am I showing my depression…?
Does any one see me…?
Can any one tell me that every thing will be okay…?
Does any one feel my pain…?
Can they see it in my eyes…?
My eyes are hurting me…
Can’t they see that I’m hurt…?
Can’t they see that I’m giving up in life…?
There is just one person that I’m happy with…
But at the same time I’m sad…
How can I make him happy to when he knows what’s going wrong with me…?
When he knows I’m not happy where I’m at….?
When he knows that even though I tell him I’m happy deep inside he knows I’m not…
But he knows that he can’t do nothing about it, just keep loving me and be there for me to hold me tight….
What should I do with this miserable life when I have some one that loves me…?
| On April 30th 2008 Hugo159 Said : | |
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life takes pain u no and im going through it rite now but all dat pain is gonna pay off later when u get dat person u always wanted ur whole life!! |
| On February 1st 2008 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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I enjoyed this poem and it's honesty. I hope you find what you need to pull through.
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| On February 1st 2008 DocBrown91 Said : | |
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Good for not having a rhyming scheme. That's hard to pull off :/
I'm notorious for hating things like this, though. (the whole "I don't know what to do with my pain/I'm in love and I can't stand it/nobody cares about or knows how to help me."
It's good, but I'd rather read something... happier? |
| On February 1st 2008 kg108551 Said : | |
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wow... emotional, yet so good! Nice work! Keep it up! :P |
| On February 1st 2008 Snooky9e Said : | |
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its very good...u know what...ill give u a million dollars if it makes u happy...u jus gotta wait until i win the lottery ok...lolz... |


