13sweetcheeks

things i can't explain

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My Poems

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+ 7	L.O.V.E.
+ 10	hate the fact...but i still love you
+ 6	hate the fact... but i still love you
+ 1	holding this
+ 5	I'm so afraid
+ 6	How could she?
+ 9	can some one help me...?
+ 5	it's been a while
+ 29	After all this pain I still love you
+ 14	Raped by a 21 year old
+ 10	I still fight for your love
+ 6	WIll this keep going on...
+ 10	tell me its this really over?

hate the fact...but i still love you

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Created on 12-6-07

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I hate when you try to compare me to her

I hate when you talk about her every single houre

I hate the fact that you still have feelings for her

I hate the fact that you denying that you still love her

I hate when you get mad at her when you said she was out of your mind

I hate when we argue, just because of her. When she is not even 10 miles next to us

I hate that after a fact that you still love her...

I'm still with you, because I love you, and I care about your feelings...

Because I hate what she did to you...when you're a great guy...

Why can't you see that she is not the one for you?

Why can't you start a new life with me?

Why can't we start a new life together?

Didn't you say we'll always be together?

Didn't you say that you will try to forget about her?

You said that you love me...

But do you realy mean it?

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On December 6th 2007 Snooky9e Said :

	very good...are u submitting that one to that broken glass thing for the school???

On December 6th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :

	good work with hard emotions. I you really wanted to,it might be slightly more unified and potent if you added two more lines at the bottom such as:"I hate that this is tearing us apart, But I still love you", or something to that effect. I know that you've already stated it,but bringing it in again at the end might add a little something extra for the flow and feel of the poem. Even if you don't use the suggestion, you've done a great job :)