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Sanity
If I learn to let go of what I dont need
But feel I need what I cant let go, am I to blame
Am I to blame when all that was thought to be possible is unintentionally lost
And most of what was said to be lost was actually taken or shall I say stolen by the demons that attack my mind and subcontiouse ,....Is it me to blame
So when and if I react to those thoughts physically and verbally where all can see me wither in my own pain
Thats when its evident that im to blame,because ive taken the actions of all my possibly lost unintentional thoughts that originally were taken by the the demons that attacked my mind and it was only then I trully appeared
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| On May 25th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said : | |
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good job |
| On May 24th 2007 november38577 Said : | |
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absolutely amazing |
| On May 23rd 2007 LJS2004 Said : | |
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Great peom. I like it! |
| On May 23rd 2007 JohnLG Said : | |
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wow |
| On May 23rd 2007 dolphingrl103 Said : | |
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well the metaphors in here i personaly can twist into what i can relate to. good job |


