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Wanting him back
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Created on 5-19-07
keep trying to get it keep wanting to give it let another keep blessing it but it knows you did live it promising never to break it and never sedate it if numbing feels needed try to take it in and take head to it.Nurture and strengthen cleanse and never taint it give the water clean the rocks and when and if it again gets soiled remember u will forever love that boy
Please Login to post comments| On March 25th 2008 myersbaby104 Said : | |
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I FEEL YUOR PAIN OR YOUR FEELING I KNOW HOW U FEEL ABOUT GETTING HIM BACK |
| On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said : | |
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well these pple are right, u do have a diff. way of writing poems.. but u write wat comes from ur heart, and thats wat counts! i liked it! |
| On May 23rd 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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i liked it a lot
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| On May 23rd 2007 LJS2004 Said : | |
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I like it has alot of emotion to it |
| On May 23rd 2007 JohnLG Said : | |
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Its a great new style of writing. |
| On May 23rd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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It is definately different, but I like it. |
| On May 21st 2007 dolphingrl103 Said : | |
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wow i really like this. It's not so "black and white" it has color, and meaning that is hidden bewteen the words |
| On May 21st 2007 BabyImEmo Said : | |
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its different but i like it |
| On May 20th 2007 BrokenWiingz Said : | |
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i like this one,ur style of writing poems does feel different |
| On May 20th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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like this one too |
| On May 20th 2007 AtotheFI Said : | |
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Your writing is...Different than most people's on here...I like it :) Yay... |
