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Turning points In my life

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Views (219) Passion Created on 5-19-07 Flag

I  lay just as I am,tired of all the burnt offerring

I lay Just as I am wishing I had more to hold and less that has been taken from me..

And when I began to think of ways I can regroup,recollect,and maintain I some how end up out of place whishing that I ...That I

The truth -well I just cant place my finger on that part so really I dont know

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On June 27th 2007 MythriS Said :
MythriS this is really good. If u dont mind me asking...wat gave u the idea of this poem? i really like it. good job :)
On June 9th 2007 sweety959 Said :
sweety959 its really good. dont take this the wrong way, but it could b better... but just keep writing. i think ull do really good as a poet. lol! BRAVO!
On May 31st 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx pretty good
On May 23rd 2007 JohnLG Said :
JohnLG I really dont know what to say...Its great!
On May 21st 2007 dolphingrl103 Said :
dolphingrl103 hmm... i think ive felt the same way
On May 21st 2007 BabyImEmo Said :
BabyImEmo i like it
On May 20th 2007 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet you have a different style than most poets on here, i like it