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this is one of my favorites rate n com.Rate this Poem
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Why bother???
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Created on 11-2-07
i am looking for a way to reveal
my thoughts and my needs
but i can't seem to find
a way to make it be real
my heart hurts
and i am alone
heartlessly broken
into thousands of shards
my wrists are glowing
but where the scars are
o there never showing
the dark is surrounding me
although i'm standing in light
so many things unspoken
so many things arn't showing
my insides doesn't match
the outside at all.
so why bother?
Please Login to post comments| On May 13th 2008 brc93 Said : | |
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Because I love you and your writing. that's why. I definately know where you're coming from. I can relate to every poem you rate. You're really special. Don't let anyone say different. Keep it up!!!! |
| On December 22nd 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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i love it ... u have talent ^_^ |
| On December 12th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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Its good |
| On November 13th 2007 EmoKid928 Said : | |
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that's good, i ask myself that question everyday. . |
| On November 2nd 2007 VelvetScars666 Said : | |
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its good
maybe work on the ending
but its good |
