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gosh this is so real i wish it wasntRate this Poem
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mii bf for life |
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I apear to be nobody |
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its all about me |
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ITS OUR STORY |
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MY DREAM GUY |
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beauty |
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my poem is real |
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my suicidal thoughts are killing me |
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i love to hate |
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stoners live and stoners die |
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i was wrong |
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YOU HAVE NO IDEA |
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Why bother??? |
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broken |
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hate (i really dont like you) |
my suicidal thoughts are killing me
none of this could be real
i wish i couldnt feel
i wish youd leave me alone
and get off your high throne
youre no better than me
its time for you to see
that its time for me to go
where? i dont know
ive got to get away
ive got to run away
i know wahtll happen if i deside to stay
you look at me like im shit
you try to make me quit
well, you win
i'm done,
i hope you had your fun
breaking me down
laughing, like ima clown
i'm sick of this place
its a never ending race
i lose
bicause its what i choose
why do you blame yourself?
i chose what i choose
it's my choice, not yours
people do nothing but talk trash
im sick of living in this doubt
now its time, i'm lashing out
i'm going to say what i feel
and do what i say
i'm done with the game your trying to play
because it takes 2 to tango
it's all over....
it's all done.....
dont even act suprised.......
| On June 16th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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This is very good. i like it. |
| On April 13th 2008 HeartBroken166 Said : | |
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I really like it...very deep. |
| On March 9th 2008 brc93 Said : | |
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really deep!!!! You and I seem to have the same outlook on like. |
| On December 30th 2007 blondbandgeek Said : | |
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damn this is reallly well done... |
| On December 22nd 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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oh i love it! it's sooo cocky lol but yea ... great job |
| On December 7th 2007 everyonexcries Said : | |
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thats really good! i like it a lot. |
| On November 26th 2007 mysuicidexxx Said : | |
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thsi is amazing i love it. has a great meaning |
| On November 26th 2007 cchamps23 Said : | |
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dammmmmmmn thats deep.. and i feel your pain.... you are really really really great!!! i just really dont hope you dont committ suicide.. =[ |
| On November 25th 2007 nick12477 Said : | |
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wow...damn...this is really well done, it kinda blows me away. just know that this is so great and i really love it :) |
| On November 24th 2007 InvisibleFlame Said : | |
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I really like this. No, x out the like...I LOVE this! So deep and emotional...really really good poem! You say you want me to read YOUR poems...please read and rate MINE! You are awesome! |
| On November 24th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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this is really deep. i know how you feel. tis one is really good |
| On November 24th 2007 bittles123 Said : | |
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damn yoo tru tru shyt dats real deep yo you a good writer yourself hitt me bakk |
| On November 13th 2007 andoi Said : | |
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wow i like this one. real meaningful =) |
| On October 25th 2007 f2daerg2i2e Said : | |
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deep.good.i relate.you almost made me cry while reading this LC[little chuckle].='[ |


