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I apear to be nobody

Views (89) Tragedy Created on 9-21-07 Flag

why does it have to be this way?

why is my life so insane?

if i were to be myself

you still wouldnt see who i am,

who i am is never the same,

i have lots of personality's

one for each one of my feelings,

just to ask me t o be myself,

i'll cry alone

while i act like someone els,

its hard to be me

when nobody wants to see,

i am nobody,

nobody is me,

i wonder why it took you so long to see

that i feel alone,

iv been scared of myself all along,

to be myself it is a crime

with nobody left to help me survive,

why does it have to be this way?

why is my life so insane?

with all the pain and all the lies

its been me all along

its been me all this time!

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On June 1st 2008 lardpiles Said :
lardpiles i like that
On February 15th 2008 marymac1986 Said :
marymac1986 thx for the comment on my poem...I appreciate it...I think you do a good job writing, I think its good to get stuff out, whether it is sweet or depressing. I write a lot of sad things, too, just don't really have much up yet. I have a hard time giving advice on poems tho b/c we each have our own style. We just need to use it to convey our thoughts and feelings. I use poetry as a way to relieve my pain and stress sometimes, when it feels like I need an outlet. My Pastor's wonderful wife (she's like my bff!!!) really encourages my writing, especially to help calm myself.
On December 29th 2007 babygirlbri321 Said :
babygirlbri321 wow!i really like this!i deff. relate and its just amazing!
On December 22nd 2007 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 wow .... i love this ... it's very easy to relate to
On December 12th 2007 yorkiedude27 Said :
yorkiedude27 wow i really like it for sure ^^ your really good :D
On November 25th 2007 prepy1emo2chik Said :
prepy1emo2chik I like that one!!!!
i feel the same waiiy sometimes...
you're realliiy good!
On November 24th 2007 Blonddynamite Said :
Blonddynamite That was a good peom. Your a really good meaningfull writer....
On November 20th 2007 aubreygraze Said :
aubreygraze i sometimes feel that way too..
On November 13th 2007 Jinjerrr Said :
Jinjerrr love it. kindaa sad but still REALLY good.
On November 4th 2007 EmoKid928 Said :
EmoKid928 that was really good
On September 26th 2007 KAMart Said :
KAMart i likes it
On September 24th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx i like it, its very interesting and creative
On September 21st 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :
my picture
please be honest because i like the truth no matter what it may be! *Ryhan*