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my first and be completly honest pleaseRate this Poem
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mii bf for life |
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I apear to be nobody |
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its all about me |
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ITS OUR STORY |
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MY DREAM GUY |
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beauty |
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my poem is real |
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my suicidal thoughts are killing me |
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i love to hate |
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stoners live and stoners die |
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i was wrong |
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YOU HAVE NO IDEA |
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Why bother??? |
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broken |
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hate (i really dont like you) |
mii bf for life
i dont know how to explain it
if only you could truly see
how much i really care for u
how much u mean to me
i look forwa rd to seeing u every day
the grin that belongs to only u
wen i see u i cant help but smile
there is just somthing about u
wen u put ur and in mine
my heart suddenly beats faster
i wish i could tell u rite then and there
that my life could never be better
wen u wrap ur arms around me for a simple, gentle hug
i just want to stay in that moment forever
and tell u how much u really are loved
wen we gradually come close enough together, our lips touch, a kiss
nothing around us seems to matter
cause there is nothing sweeter than this
no words could ever express how much u mean to me
i hope u have these feelings for me too; i cant figure out just what it is but there is definently something special about u!
| On July 14th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aww this is adorable |
| On March 9th 2008 brc93 Said : | |
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WOW!! REALLY good. I've felt like that with one person and one person only. But, she screwed me over, I could be dead and she wouldn't care. It's nice to know that it wasn't bad for me to fee like that |
| On December 22nd 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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very nice ... i like how it flows so freely off the tongue ^_^ |
| On November 26th 2007 brc93 Said : | |
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Speacless. That is beyond amaziung!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On November 23rd 2007 mackenzie3893 Said : | |
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tks for the poem comment!and your work is great!brillent writing! |
| On November 22nd 2007 Crueldreams Said : | |
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I likes it :]] Good job ^^ |
| On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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omgsh! i really loved this poem! |
| On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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omgsh! i really loved this poem! |
| On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said : | |
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omgsh! i really loved this poem! |
| On October 30th 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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it is good, could use a few minor changes, but all around good |
| On September 24th 2007 boogama2001 Said : | |
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is cute |
| On September 7th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said : | |
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good poem but you have to kinda draw in the reader better use more discriptive words! =) check out my stuff? |
| On September 7th 2007 aj10023 Said : | |
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I like it alot.....it is very meaningful and well put together! |
| On September 7th 2007 aj10023 Said : | |
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I like it alot.....it is very meaningful and well put together! |
| On September 7th 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said : | |
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please tell me if its good or not, and be completly honest
*RYHAN* |


