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my first and be completly honest please

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mii bf for life

Views (90) Love Created on 9-7-07 Flag

i dont know how to explain it

if only you could truly see

how much i really care for u

how much u mean to me

i look forwa rd to seeing u every day

the grin that belongs to only u

wen i see u i cant help but smile

there is just somthing about u

wen u put ur and in mine

my heart suddenly beats faster

i wish i could tell u rite then and there

that  my life could never be better

wen u wrap ur arms around me for a simple, gentle hug

i just want to stay in that moment forever

and tell u how much u really are loved

wen we gradually come close enough together, our lips touch, a kiss

nothing around us seems to matter

cause there is nothing sweeter than this

no words could ever express how much u mean to me

 i hope u have these feelings for me too; i cant figure out just what it is but there is definently something special about u!

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On July 14th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH aww this is adorable
On March 9th 2008 brc93 Said :
brc93 WOW!! REALLY good. I've felt like that with one person and one person only. But, she screwed me over, I could be dead and she wouldn't care. It's nice to know that it wasn't bad for me to fee like that
On December 22nd 2007 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 very nice ... i like how it flows so freely off the tongue ^_^
On November 26th 2007 brc93 Said :
brc93 Speacless. That is beyond amaziung!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On November 23rd 2007 mackenzie3893 Said :
mackenzie3893 tks for the poem comment!and your work is great!brillent writing!
On November 22nd 2007 Crueldreams Said :
Crueldreams I likes it :]] Good job ^^
On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! i really loved this poem!
On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! i really loved this poem!
On November 19th 2007 chocohott Said :
chocohott omgsh! i really loved this poem!
On October 30th 2007 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 it is good, could use a few minor changes, but all around good
On September 24th 2007 boogama2001 Said :
boogama2001 is cute
On September 7th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said :
XxEMOxBITCHxX good poem but you have to kinda draw in the reader better use more discriptive words! =) check out my stuff?
On September 7th 2007 aj10023 Said :
aj10023 I like it alot.....it is very meaningful and well put together!
On September 7th 2007 aj10023 Said :
aj10023 I like it alot.....it is very meaningful and well put together!
On September 7th 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :
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please tell me if its good or not, and be completly honest *RYHAN*