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It Took Me All Night!!!Rate this Poem
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1 kmiss=1 hit....1 kiss=1 whip |
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Crisisum Hurts |
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IM addicted!!NOT |
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long live the goddess"s |
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Breakup Note |
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CAN ONLY HAVE ME |
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iF COAL CAN TURN TO DIAMONDS |
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Powerless Girl |
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JUST WANNA BE ME |
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FORBIDDEN LUV |
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Shes never gunna luvu like i do!! |
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LOVES LIL GAMES |
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Im Not 6 Any More |
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Luvz Lil Gamez #2 |
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My Secret Luv |
Loved Then Lost
Richer or Poor
Till death do us part
You told me those vows
Then you broke my heart
Night or Day
Rain or Shine
Now When i see you
I Break down and cry
I miss..
The way my hand brushes through your hair
The smell of your air
My head on your chest
Those memories were the best
So soft and Secure
You dont know how much it hurt.
You played tricks with my mind
But now its my time to shine
Brushing you away might be a mistake
What ever Happens,..Happens...That is my Fait!!
MORE TEW COME SEWN!!
Till death do us part
You told me those vows
Then you broke my heart
Night or Day
Rain or Shine
Now When i see you
I Break down and cry
I miss..
The way my hand brushes through your hair
The smell of your air
My head on your chest
Those memories were the best
So soft and Secure
You dont know how much it hurt.
You played tricks with my mind
But now its my time to shine
Brushing you away might be a mistake
What ever Happens,..Happens...That is my Fait!!
MORE TEW COME SEWN!!
| On March 12th 2008 naenae765 Said : | |
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OMG DEANNA THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL! KEEP WRITTING!! |
| On March 11th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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I really like it. Nice rhyme. |


