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iF COAL CAN TURN TO DIAMONDS
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Created on 8-2-07
If coal can turn to diamonds,
then sand can turn to a pearl
and a worm can turn into a buttafly and love can rule the world
LA LA LA LALALALALA LALALAALALALALa!!
(REPEAT 1ST PART)
then sand can turn to a pearl
and a worm can turn into a buttafly and love can rule the world
LA LA LA LALALALALA LALALAALALALALa!!
(REPEAT 1ST PART)
Please Login to post comments| On September 11th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I saw the title, and I thought, well, maybe this won't be so bad... but then the page loaded, and I realized how short it was... definitely no effort put into this...I went ahead and read it...First Line, title repeat...decent...Next line, catchy little phrase, nice feel...but then the next line just drags on and on and on... though the words seem to work good for two lines...Has the potential to be reall good... but then I noticed the author's comments...Did you even write this? |
