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You Stole My Breath
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Created on 4-28-07
Well you stole my breath away,I’m not sure I’ll be okay.I’m not sure how much longer I can last,I’m falling for you hard and fast. Craziness, watch out, gotta be careful,Erasing all the messages where you’re calling me beautiful.Tell me I’m not the only one,Please tell me I’m not in love alone. Well you stole my breath away,I’m not sure I’ll be okay.I’m not sure how much longer I can last,I’m falling for you hard and fast. You’re bringing down these walls,That I never thought would ever fall.My smile’s lasting longer,Emotions getting stronger. Well you stole my breath away,I’m not sure I’ll be okay.I’m not sure how much longer I can last,I’m falling for you hard and fast. Now I’m giving you a chance to rip me apart,And praying to God you don’t break my heart.I’m not sure how much longer I’ll last,When I’m falling for you this hard and fast.
Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2008 apstolicwwjd Said : | |
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You're a very good poet!!! you've got alot of talent.... apostolicwwjd |
| On October 6th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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oh,and did I mention that this is fantastic? |
| On October 6th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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great work |
| On August 17th 2007 Babydotz Said : | |
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Wow... You have awesome talent! I like it! Great work! |
| On July 16th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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i totally feel this way, this poem is awesome!! |
| On July 14th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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wow love this good job |
| On July 9th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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nice writing - beautiful. |
| On July 9th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said : | |
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This really speaks to me today...i saw somewhere recently that when you love, you give someone the power to destroy you but trust them not to...with that in mind, this speaks volumes to me...great poem. |
| On July 4th 2007 honeyyrider007 Said : | |
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Wow i love this!!! |
| On June 30th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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this is one of my favorites~I like the repetition! |
| On June 29th 2007 cbewing Said : | |
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it made me smile :) |
| On May 29th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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It is good to hear a positive poem! |
| On May 14th 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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LOVE this! So sweet. [Wish I felt this,too. :/ ]
Great job! Really. |
| On May 11th 2007 sandevil Said : | |
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very good , i like it |
| On May 6th 2007 paintshoppro Said : | |
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AHHHHHHHH!..I LOVE IT..this is awesome..this is how i felt just recently...stupid men..jk ♥ ...i love them..but i hate them |
