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Created on 4-23-07
I’m up late every night knowing I should tell,But I’m too terrified that you’ll just scream and yell.I know that you won’t understand,How he scarred me with his hands.Every touch that I received,Came with fear that made it hard to breathe.I want to know how I kept this from you,Was it really that hard to see what I was going through?Was I really that good at hiding my pain,Or are you really just that vain?As much as he hurt me, you hurt me that much more,By never finding out why he locked that door.Now I’m trying to learn to deal,But scars that deep just don’t heal.My mind in public places is always on high alert,Probably ‘cause I relive all the hurt.Please believe what I’m telling you,I know you didn’t believe her but I have no doubt that it was true.I know you won’t understand what I’ve felt,But at least try to help me with what I’ve been dealt.Don’t roll your eyes at my tears,But please, oh please, don’t ignore my fears.The next time you bring me down hard,I will play my biggest card.And I know you will stop and stare,But you will finally know my nightmare.
Please Login to post comments| On December 29th 2007 DemonzR4eva Said : | |
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IF THIS IS TRUE, I MEAN REALLY HAPPENING TO YOU THEN YOU REALLY NEED TO REPORT THIS IMMEDIATELY!!!!!
PEACE!!!!! |
| On December 10th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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This is very intriging in that the beginning starts by saying you won't tell, then you state later that you'll use it against the person. It should be told, definitely. But only to help yourself. If you hurt someone else with that knowledge intentionally-it will only add to your pain in the end. The guy who did that to you should be reported. |
| On July 30th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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a m a z i n g....i am speechless,, knockout ending!! |
| On July 15th 2007 xxsarah18xx Said : | |
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this is good. its like .. something traumatized you. its wierd but i feel this one hehe |
| On June 28th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love this. You are so amazing with your words. Again, I can feel the emotions exploding from the lines. I agree (with above) that the last two lines are so powerful-great way to end it. |
| On June 1st 2007 Darkrisky Said : | |
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that's really good and definitely creates imagery. good job! |
| On May 21st 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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its hard when those that are supposed to protect us fall short. |
| On May 6th 2007 paintshoppro Said : | |
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deep..it makes me feel like crying..wow, the pain
.awesome poem |
| On May 4th 2007 shallowspit1 Said : | |
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Beautiful...and true for me also...only I didn't and they got away. A coward I guess you could say I am. |
| On April 24th 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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I like the last two sentences. They really stand out. |
| On April 24th 2007 bloodrush545 Said : | |
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That is really good. |
