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Beautifully Destroyed Mind
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Created on 3-29-07
I fall asleep at night,Trying desperately to not lose the fight.I wake people up screaming,The ask me about what I was dreaming. The truth is getting hard to keep in,I’m not sure I can keep it hidden.I’m running out of time,My beautifully destroyed mind. Silently tears fall down,When I get angry as I fall to the ground.The devil’s whispering in my ear,I’m losing control; he begins to sneer. The truth is getting hard to keep in,I’m not sure I can keep it hidden.I’m running out of time,My beautifully destroyed mind. Blood pours out from my veins,I’m not the slightest bit ashamed.The Devil’s whispering you belong to me,I hear God saying, come; I will set you free. The truth is getting hard to keep in,I’m not sure I can keep it hidden.I’m running out of time,My beautifully destroyed mind. I’m scared of moving on,I might make a mistake or do everything wrong.I’m now screaming out to God,While the Devil’s calling me a fraud. The truth is getting hard to keep in,I’m not sure I can keep it hidden.I’m running out of time,My beautifully destroyed mind. I’m not giving up,I’ll just make myself tough.I won’t ever share my horror story again,Cause people just ask, “how could you let them win.” The truth may be harder to keep in,But I will keep it hidden.I don’t care if I’m running out of time,It’s just my beautifully destroyed mind.
Please Login to post comments| On November 10th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said : | |
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incredable, i would give anything to be abe to write like you! good work honey! thanks for the comments on my storys |
| On October 29th 2007 bfba Said : | |
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wow thats really good. you're an amazing writer. |
| On July 9th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said : | |
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Thats so emotionally charged...again, i wish i could write with my felings like that |
| On July 8th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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I really feel your emotions when i read your poems, VERY good job. |
| On July 5th 2007 cbewing Said : | |
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I really like this one. It sounds like lyrics to a song. |
| On June 13th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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it's really good. it's a very good way to put it. |
| On May 21st 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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This is a really really awe inspiring poem! |
| On April 20th 2007 blutess Said : | |
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u have away with words. very good. |
| On April 15th 2007 paintshoppro Said : | |
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wow, i love it...the repetition really captivates your frustration and gives it rhythm |
| On April 15th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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Awesome! you have a nack for writing! Keep it up! it makes you think and is a work of art. |
| On April 11th 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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Running out of time. I feel the same way. Sometimes I feel like I'm just waiting to not be able to handle it anymore. God is what keeps me saying-one more day, you can live one more day. |
| On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said : | |
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ONE OF MY FAVS!!! this is just amazing i have run out of words to decribe your pieces they're all so good they just take my thoughts away!! i REALLY like them!!!!♪ |
| On April 7th 2007 moraldecay12 Said : | |
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the title is really catchy. i like it.... |
| On March 31st 2007 sandevil Said : | |
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i like this |
