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Little Fallen Angel

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I cry out a heart breaking moan,As my bleeding heart turns to stone.I run to my hiding place,To hide the tears streaming down my face.You're looking at me with your head angled,I refuse to be your fallen angel.Your eyes penetrate my soul,I refuse to tell you what those demons stole.Another slap that knocks me down,I stumble as I get off the ground.I scream at you that I can't go on,You turn and glare and say I'm wrong.You're looking at me with your head angled,I don't want to be your fallen angel.Your eyes continue to penetrate my soul,I don't want to tell you what those demons stole.You're telling me you're sorry, that you never should've yelled,Yet I'm not listening cause I'm under some sort of spell.Stop apologizing for causing me pain,I'm the one who should be ashamed.You're looking at me with your head angled,Maybe I'm your fallen angel.Your eyes are starting to penetrate my soul,Maybe I want to tell you what those demons stole.I whisper out a silent plea,Instantly you're there to help me.I finally tell you why I'm scared,I here you say you know and always cared.You're looking at me with your head angled,I whisper that I'm your fallen angel.Your eyes have finally penetrated my soul,Now you know what those demons stole.
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On September 15th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said :
lyrikaldisastr i checked out one of ur poems..which lead me to another...and now this one...dang u got madd skillz....u like just make the reader zone out and picture the situations good
On August 31st 2008 jesco09 Said :
jesco09 i like very much... very very nice job
On July 22nd 2008 Natalyi Said :
Natalyi I love the way your words just flow right on the pages. Great work....
On January 3rd 2008 Cinderbellx001 Said :
Cinderbellx001 very awesome poem! good job
On October 15th 2007 MCRgoddess Said :
MCRgoddess that is sooo kwl. AMAZING!
On July 14th 2007 tafygirl Said :
tafygirl wow this is awesome!! it sounds like it should be lyrics to a song. you should find someone who can put it to music. or maybe you can. it would be an amazing song.
On April 22nd 2007 lilpandeha15 Said :
lilpandeha15 that was mind blowing
On April 15th 2007 hottiebabe74 Said :
hottiebabe74 thaT is the best thing ever and im amazed how people come ^ with this stuff
On April 11th 2007 peterzshadow Said :
peterzshadow Yeah. Wow. I agree with the others here.
On April 7th 2007 Tony1985 Said :
Tony1985 I love this... I can't see why you have so many views and hardly any votes. This is such a great poem and like craxychik, this also hits home. way to go :D
On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said :
craxychik I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN HOW MUCH THIS ONE "HITS HOME" IT IS AN AMAZING PIECE!!! I LUV IT VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING VERY...VERY...IDK I CAN'T EVEN EXPLIAN IT...IT JUST SPEAKS FOR ITSELF!! BEAUTIFUL!!!
On February 23rd 2007 fudgesicles Said :
fudgesicles that is terrific writing good job