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Ending The Pain

Views (314) Pain Created on 1-19-07 Flag
I calmly cocks the gun,  As I place it under my jaw and the tears begin to run.  I tried cutting with my knife,  But the pain never left my life.  I cry out in pain,  From my parents saying they're ashamed.  My finger quivers on the trigger,  I wonders how long it will take for my body set into rigor.  My hand starts to shake,  As I think about the descision I'm about to make.  I whisper a prayer to help my friends understand,  That they'll remember what was truely at hand.  I remembers all the good stuff,  Then think about all the rough.  A chill runs up my spine,  Making me stop the crying.  I didn't want to end it this way,  But I couldn't have gone on one more day.  
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On December 31st 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Wow..This is so emotional...
On November 25th 2007 ALIESAM21 Said :
ALIESAM21 wow, this is better than my suicide poem , i loved it, just remember to stay with us please!
On August 18th 2007 Ash94leigh Said :
Ash94leigh AWSOME!!!
On August 17th 2007 lilpain0103 Said :
lilpain0103 It was so sad but I loved it too. good job
On July 15th 2007 roxielox Said :
roxielox *tears*
On July 14th 2007 tafygirl Said :
tafygirl Wow awesome!! very sad but amazing at the same time
On June 30th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like this one-
On June 29th 2007 jenn444 Said :
jenn444 wow so good!!
On April 23rd 2007 XxjustxmexX Said :
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that is an awsome poem!
On April 20th 2007 blutess Said :
blutess another touching and good poem.
On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said :
craxychik wow this is yet another amazing one...even though i my self have thought about it MANY times, it is never the right way to go... ur life is too precious for it to end...no matter what look up...God is always waiting w/ open arms...even though you may not see the beattiful picture right now that God is creating w/ your life there is one and it is Quite a master piece!!!
On January 31st 2007 sincerelyichab Said :
sincerelyichab Reminds me a lot of the book I'm currently reading by Mitch Albom..a mysterious thing...ending ones life and all our different views on it, how they're to be written...very well done explaining the rush of emotion you might of felt if you were to do that before you actually "did" it..
On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF wow. your life is way to precious to ever stop it. i don't know you, but it is very true.
On January 19th 2007 JCochran0985 Said :
JCochran0985 I love suicide poems, I've written quite a few myself. :)