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That Little Girl
Oh Lord, her world spun off the floor, Why would you let him hurt that little girl? Her body trembled as he locked the door, You let his cold touch make her mind swirl. God you know no one can reach her mind, You ask her a question, all you get is a NO. Now all she wants is to leave her fear behind, Tell her she can talk, she'll only say So. Dear God I can't stand when she starts crying, Why'd you let them hurt her all over again? You know I can't stand having to lie, But she says hate is an even bigger sin. Lord you understand I can't help her at all, She'll change the topic if I start that talk. She claims tears soften the fall, Yet I don't see how, when she lands on a rock. So Jesus how does it feel to watch that little girl, The one who lies and cries herself to sleep? Do you remember how she used to spin and twirl, When her spirit was free and the pain wasn't deep? Just one more question Lord and it's a big one, When her fear runs out what will she face him and say? "She will say", came a still voice, "It's over, I'm done." And thanks to God that little girl will forgive him and walk away. Darling Son I have not forgotten her, For she was my little girl and I love her more than you do. So if you will trust me Sir, I'll promise you that her dreams will come true.
| On March 2nd 2008 L2Elisabeth Said : | |
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wow. sooo deep.
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| On May 21st 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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God gave us freedom of choice. heart-breaking poem, very well written |
| On May 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I love it! Very good! |
| On April 11th 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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I don't know how to say this..
But..I think anyone who has experienced something like that, would find this poem..spoke. Thankz. |
| On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said : | |
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WOW that is an amazing poem i luv it!! it really speaks!!! |
| On March 29th 2007 TaiMe2 Said : | |
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beautifully written,Poet kudos.
Don't ever stop believing. |
| On February 11th 2007 rinmoon Said : | |
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deep, makes me cry. |
| On February 10th 2007 persistence Said : | |
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that's deeply beautiful! wonderful work! |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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and just to add, i don't find it hard to follow. |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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i love it! totally love it! |
| On January 18th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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sorry if its hard to follow... its kinda got a lot of story lines in it. |


