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Your Disgrace
You always put me down, Whenever I'm around. It's not enough to watch me cry, Would you like me to give up and die? It's hard to want to go on, When in your eyes I only do wrong. In front of all your friends you say you're a lucky person, But behind closed doors your temper worsens. I tear slips down my face, As you scream at me that I'm a disgrace. I know you don't care, I can read it in your unwavering glare. You know..., I'm not going to end my life, In strife with this knife. If I have to be in hell, I won't stay and be your average rebel. It's time for me to disagree, And finally become free.
| On December 31st 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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I can relate to much. Very strong message, awesome work! |
| On August 21st 2007 bleedingwolf Said : | |
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another wonderful poem. beautifully written |
| On August 2nd 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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Wow! Very emotional words. You did a great job of vocing your pain. |
| On June 18th 2007 wrustymay Said : | |
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...again....i can relate...i wish i couldnt but i can... |
| On May 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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This is how I feel when my mom gets at me and yes indeed I too long to be free. |
| On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said : | |
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WOW u are a VERY talented writer!!! |
| On February 10th 2007 persistence Said : | |
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this is very strongly said, worthy of music in the background! |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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yes. i like this one. be free! |
| On January 16th 2007 yourbaby16 Said : | |
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i really like this one... |


