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Only A Boy

Views (411) Love Created on 1-7-07 Flag
I whispered your name,You never came.You couldn't handle the clue,That I would never stop loving you.You said to stop saying shit,A tear rolled down as I took your verbal hit.You think you're such a man, yet you're only a boy,Cause only someone so inmature would use me like a toy.I want to get through to you,But I'm tired of not knowing what to do.
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On January 16th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said :
MyHeartIsAPOW Wow! I should show this one to the ex.... I'm pretty sure they are all boys at heart... lol
On December 10th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv I love this!!! You capture the difference between man/boy quite amazingly here. I like that.
On November 10th 2007 halli1995 Said :
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i think u did good on this one! very well writen!
On November 10th 2007 halli1995 Said :
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i think u did good on this one! very well writen!
On August 21st 2007 bleedingwolf Said :
bleedingwolf lovely. another good one to relate too. your so good with getting the reader to connect.
On July 15th 2007 xxsarah18xx Said :
xxsarah18xx wonderful, i like this poem* nicely put together ehhe
On July 14th 2007 jarnotti Said :
jarnotti nicely written
On July 7th 2007 guitaristcse Said :
guitaristcse Thats, ah, touching. Its also, ah personal. Good poem
On June 20th 2007 hurdlestar Said :
hurdlestar Wow, simply wow!! really shows how a guy can think he is so much more than he really is and let no one else, not even his gf, tell him otherwise. well written and spoken, love the rhyming, great job!! ^_^
On May 14th 2007 suicideXwishes Said :
suicideXwishes i like this one alot :] :]
On April 22nd 2007 lilpandeha15 Said :
lilpandeha15 i like it alot
On April 22nd 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This is definetly one of my favorites
On April 22nd 2007 lildevil357 Said :
lildevil357 I like it!
On March 17th 2007 littlemiss6 Said :
littlemiss6 WoW! That's how I feel about my X...Ryan =( I cried 2day b/c of that stupid jerk
On January 28th 2007 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF yeah, I like it...