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A Change Without Sound
I look and see the long, long road behind me,I glace ahead and see a road that’s never-ending.Stare out the side window and see wide open spaces,I’m no longer seeing broken faces.The white lines are scattered ahead,Reminds me of lives that are shattered and dead.A solid line on the right hand lane,Why do I always take the blame?If things are really the same,Then why have so many things changed?Nobody knows how close I am to a breakdown,That doesn’t matter, ‘cause my death will come without sound.My life is such a lie,I don’t have any more tears to cry.With this last sigh,It’s time to say goodbye.The knife will enter, swift and fast,I won’t have a chance to gasp.Just like that it will be over with,And so many people will wonder why I slipped.No one will know about the pain I was delt,‘Cause no one really cared about how I felt.My parents schemes will finally be put to rest,After I ended what they thought was best.So maybe finally they’ll see,What they forced to become of me.
| On October 9th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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Very nice! |
| On October 7th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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This one is good, very expressive i like it. |
| On July 8th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said : | |
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you always write with such power...its impressive...my writing is so passive and detatched...its because im a scientist first and a poet second |
| On May 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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This poem leaves me quite speechless as this sounds about something..I actually had planned on doing, but was stopped.. |
| On April 15th 2007 damndiabetic09 Said : | |
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...wow. It's deep, and there is more behind it than origanaly typed. The poem absorbs you like a sponge and doesn't let go. Extremely respectable work you have here. |
| On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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sry, I meant to say that THIS is great... I can't type all that well when I'm trying to type fast |
| On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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Htis is great! |
| On April 8th 2007 pvtrobinson Said : | |
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wow |
| On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said : | |
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wow you really put into words the things that many ppl feel but can never say...just reading your poems frees us a little!! |
| On February 9th 2007 Jewelz530 Said : | |
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love the poem is it really about you ur is it just somthing u wrout but iether way it was good and i like it alot |
| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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wow |
| On January 9th 2007 funinthesunooo Said : | |
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Good! |
| On December 26th 2006 MarineAngel Said : | |
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I really like yours too!!!!!!!!!!!! |


