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Created on 12-12-06
Just because I'm free,You'll always be jealous of me.I know you can't understand,Everything I have at hand.I know that as I win,You think it's the biggest sin.As you grumble about what I've gained,I pray that God will guide our reins.As I think about the words you hurl,I wish you were calling me your "little girl."I hope that someday you will see,The kind of person this has made me.
Please Login to post comments| On April 9th 2008 MonkeyLover115 Said : | |
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ok i was hooked as soon as i read the author's comment-thingy. i can relate so well. i love this it is very good :D. i wrote a poem one night when i was feeling so depressed from him,,............and if you want to read it go ahead and if u do please tell me what you think of it :] it's called the pain a father can cause.............. just fyi :) --Raeshelle. |
| On December 10th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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Wow! That's raw emotion. I love that! This is a sad, but beautiful poem! |
| On November 11th 2007 RobinE31 Said : | |
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great poem.. it really hits close to home :) |
| On October 5th 2007 roxielox Said : | |
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ooo mi goodness that wuz great! |
| On July 8th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said : | |
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wow...very powerful...moving...me likey |
| On June 28th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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this is a very emotional piece-very powerful. There is so much underlying pain in it and for that my heart goes out to you. |
| On June 18th 2007 wrustymay Said : | |
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....this is rlly good. i can so relate.... |
| On April 26th 2007 paintshoppro Said : | |
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wow, its deep..sometimes i feel like that, when im underestimated or misinterpreted |
| On April 22nd 2007 lildevil357 Said : | |
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I love it! |
| On April 22nd 2007 lilpandeha15 Said : | |
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thats a really good poem |
| On April 7th 2007 craxychik Said : | |
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once again another GREAT poem!!!
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| On January 29th 2007 thethreatIF Said : | |
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good! i like this poem! |
| On January 9th 2007 JohnHubschman Said : | |
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Very good
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| On January 2nd 2007 Benjithekid Said : | |
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i like it, its good |
| On December 22nd 2006 lizdubois Said : | |
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good! |
