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To Give Up Or Fight

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I had it all planned out,

I knew I could do it, there wasn’t a doubt.

Sometimes though other people step in your path,

Then you either fight or become consumed by your wrath.

 

I’ve fought my whole life for every breath I took,

Fought for every dream, reading every book.

 

I started from the bottom and worked my way up,

I got the undeserving looks because I perfected the little stuff.

Walking out with a first place here and there,

Comments like she didn’t deserve that, followed by a glare.

 

I’ve fought my whole life for every breath I took,

Fought for every dream, reading every book.

 

Hours spent practicing so I could hold my head up high,

My horse isn’t as expensive as yours, but I refuse to walk away dry.

I had a dream, had it all planned out,

It crashed and burned but I refuse to sit around and pout.

 

I’ve fought my whole life for every breath I took,

Fought for every dream, reading every book.

 

You get to choose the path you take,

I refuse to give up no matter how many mistakes I make.

I’ve been on the edge, I’ve tried to give up,

Yet every time my tenacity asks “so you’re not that tough?”

 

I’ve fought my whole life for every breath I took,

Fought for every dream, reading every book.

 

It comes down to this, make mistakes and learn but never stray,

The world will make you fall, but they can’t take you’re dreams away.

So this year won’t be easy, but I’ll still make my dreams come true,

Even if it is the last thing I’ll do.

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On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Very inspiring!
On February 28th 2008 jeff2625 Said :
jeff2625 I love this poem..what a great pick me up..I really needed to read this..Im sort of in a rut lately..great work..
On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch I am so glad for you! Keep on going and eventually they will look at you differantly, they will have no choice. You touched my heart with this!
On February 7th 2008 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Wow, you caught my respect on this one. It makes me think of getting back up myself.
On February 7th 2008 craxychik Said :
craxychik i really like this one~determination is the key to success :) luv it!!
On February 5th 2008 Jeff1315 Said :
Jeff1315 Great poem for sure :) i like the repetition and theres a great rhythm to it :)
On February 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord All i can say is..... "YOU GO GIRL!!!" the only limitation we have in life are the one's we place there.
On February 3rd 2008 shallowspit1 Said :
shallowspit1 Tis a respectable poem...could you check out mine possible.