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Overcome By Fear
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Created on 8-17-07
Dark secrets, Red lines;Never having quite enough time.Haunted nightmares, Aqua tears;Sick of running from my fears.Angry fights, Burgundy pools;I really want to lose this dual.Hate filled comments, Blackened nails;I can’t believe you don’t see this trial.Long sleeved shirts, Blonde hair down;You couldn’t care less that I’m around.Simple make-up, Brown fear filled eyes;You never pick up on my lies.Awe filled silence, to Tarnished news;Another night with a brand new bruise.A fear filled hate letter, written in Grey;I don’t know why I’m here today.Another day, another Red cut,How did I fall into this rut?I shake my head, a Silver tear falls;I pick up that phone and make a call.You calm me down, wash away the Blue;Laugh and say I’ll see you soon.The dark secrets return, the Red lines reappear;And once again I’m overcome by fear.
Please Login to post comments| On June 16th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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this was really good. very vivid. im glad i read it. |
| On February 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Brilliant!!! hopeing that it is not from personal experiance. |
| On January 16th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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brilliant work!! |
| On November 3rd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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its in a different format, I like it |
| On November 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I like how you have so many colors describing different things from eyes to a letter. Great Poem! |
| On October 30th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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Very good poem. Lifes' ruts are easy to fall into, but when you're to the point of realizing you're in one, remember that means you are in the position to fight back |
| On October 8th 2007 tido11986 Said : | |
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i dont know a whole lot about poems, but i like it. |
| On October 6th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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very good style,and it does capture what it is like to be self-destructive, afraid of living a stagnate life, and how it can't all just go away at once |
| On September 30th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Very impressive! great poem! |
| On September 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the way you used the colors and color reactions (or something) to emphasize your thoughts. It flows really well and sounds great! Wonderful job:) |
| On September 9th 2007 damndiabetic09 Said : | |
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great rhyme scheme. The poem has the knack for making forget about everything else until i reach the glorious ending. However, fear is everywhere. ya can't avoid it. Sorry i took so long to take a look at your poems, i have had several family deaths, and i have been in Washington state for a while |
| On September 2nd 2007 z3ch Said : | |
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thats a great poem, i like how descriptive it is,great job! i also wrote a couple new poems also |
| On August 20th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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this is very good..:) |
| On August 19th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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Wow. |
