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Daddy Please
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Created on 8-17-07
Look daddy I love you a lot,But all of this drama has got to stop.Before you butted in I was doing just fine,But right now you’re making me lose my mind.Stop beating yourself up, it’s not your fault,Just let me deal with my own assault.I can handle this if you give me my space,But if not there will be consequences to face.I know you want to fix it all,But you have to learn to let me fall.I can pick myself up; I’ve done it before,It’s not like it’s hard to get up off the floor.You pushed me away when I was ten,So you can stop pretending to be my best friend.Please don’t be depressed and sad,It really only makes me mad.Understand I am not angry with you,I just can’t look forward and deal with your emotions too.I don’t have much more to say,So please don’t take this the wrong way.
Please Login to post comments| On March 9th 2008 Bumpkingurl Said : | |
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That is exactly what I wish I could say to my dad. Thankyou for embodying what my heart has been screaming to say. |
| On January 16th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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well done, I have goosebumps |
| On December 10th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I really like that this is more a letter that rhymes than a poem. It makes it more real, and more deeply felt. I love it! |
| On November 3rd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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I like it. I lost my birth dad at age 2 due to the fact I was taken away |
| On November 1st 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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OO yes i can realate, only found out who my dad was as 16. grate flow. I like, yes I Do. |
| On November 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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This is really good! |
| On October 30th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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I've never known my dad and he never came back around, but I'm sure I wouldn't want to deal with it if he had tried to either |
| On October 9th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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Love this one! |
| On October 1st 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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It's funny how this just seems to be the way that alot of men are. One the one hand you have to give the man credit for sticking around or at least coming back,but when you've done alot of growing up without them it's not easy to let them give the input they want to. It's like they don't seem to understand the way emotions work |
| On September 30th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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I love your style of poetry, very much incredible. |
| On September 27th 2007 z3ch Said : | |
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i can relate, this one sounds similar to my poem bout my dad, great one |
| On September 15th 2007 killerXmacky13 Said : | |
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oh my god i love it |
| On August 19th 2007 Jeff1315 Said : | |
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LOVE it. |
| On August 19th 2007 inuyashalied Said : | |
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i can really relate. i love this poem. it is really good. |
