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Screaming and Shouting |
Screaming and Shouting
Days fade into other days
time never stands still
in that moment of all moments
everything changed.
when you could be what you wanted.
when you could speak your mind.
but then at that moment it was ALL gone!
You cant look back
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you cant change
it wont EVER be te same!
from your heart your reaching out
Its all bottled up and you cant let it out!
you can scream...
you can shout...
but you cant hide the truth
no one can hear you...
sinking down you try to catch your breath
but its to late
theres nothing left...
face that facts and take the pain
when will you relize its not a game?!
the race is nearly over
and you fall to your feet in defeat
now its over
cant you see?
whats left of you
is whats left of me!
| On May 19th 2008 lovelylite Said : | |
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aww...omg this is good me like it. |
| On March 8th 2008 k15smith Said : | |
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Cool great job |
| On December 11th 2007 assumetheworst Said : | |
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awsome! great job :D |
| On November 3rd 2007 emorocker2198 Said : | |
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wow that was awesome.will u read some of mine |
| On November 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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quite an intriguing poem.....i like it. |
| On October 30th 2007 hpriestess Said : | |
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Beautiful! |
| On October 28th 2007 charissa14 Said : | |
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aw... wow this is really good ... I love it. :) |


