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When your dieing inside

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Screaming and Shouting

Screaming and Shouting

Views (187) Tragedy Created on 10-28-07 Flag

Days fade into other days

time never stands still

in that moment of all moments

everything changed.

when you could be what you wanted.

when you could speak your mind.

but then at that moment it was ALL gone!

You cant  look back

and

you cant change

it wont EVER be te same!

from your heart your reaching out

Its all bottled up and you cant let it out!

you can scream...

you can shout...

but you cant hide the truth

no one can hear you...

sinking down you try to catch your breath

but its to late

theres nothing left...

face that facts and take the pain

when will you relize its not a game?!

the race is nearly over

and you fall to your feet in defeat

now its over

cant you see?

whats left of you

is whats left of me!

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On May 19th 2008 lovelylite Said :
lovelylite aww...omg this is good me like it.
On March 8th 2008 k15smith Said :
k15smith Cool great job
On December 11th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst awsome! great job :D
On November 3rd 2007 emorocker2198 Said :
emorocker2198 wow that was awesome.will u read some of mine
On November 3rd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 quite an intriguing poem.....i like it.
On October 30th 2007 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess Beautiful!
On October 28th 2007 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 aw... wow this is really good ... I love it. :)