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12 cuts and some tears
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Created on 6-23-07
the cuts run so deep, so blood red and fearless
alone she will weep, her eyes filled with tears,
as the blood pours...
a suicide note, a razor, 12 cuts and some tears are all that is left of this girl and her fears
Please Login to post comments| On September 30th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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huh I LIKE IT a LOT |
| On August 11th 2007 msc1990 Said : | |
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thats real good |
| On July 7th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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this is great! |
| On June 24th 2007 07014Erry Said : | |
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i have put a longer version of this but i put it in the wrong category lol its in anger and is called 12 cuts and some tears: before the pain |
| On June 24th 2007 amanda710faith Said : | |
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lol i would love it to be longer but i think its great =D |
| On June 24th 2007 emofreakrox Said : | |
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its great
ur as good writer |
| On June 24th 2007 PureRevenge420 Said : | |
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i like it and thats ok |
| On June 24th 2007 07014Erry Said : | |
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its not very good now i read it again but i kinda got writers block and i lost what was in my head. |
